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©2006-2009 ~IcephantomAyori
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I hate the little space you have in the title

Title: Ripped Flesh - Ayori's Self Image



Ayori thinks of herself like this not even half a person. Ayori is overweight and doesnt like how she looks so this is what i do think of myself.

Ripped flesh, torn at the shoulder.
The heart only left from what you know of her.

Beating slowly as the blood flows away.
A thought of selfimage that doesnt fade or stay.

A painful smile as skin torn from skin.
It rips away almost all of my sin.

I still have some left within this broken heart of mine.
Within the Devil's book, is that where i should sign?

An old body worn that is now torn from me.
My eyesight turned foggy, I cannot see.

Ripped flesh, torn at the shoulder.
Not even a thought of the girl was her.

Poem and Art (c) Ayori

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:iconredoctober90:
I think your bloody needs to be runnier. It looks much like jelly.

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Es gibt kein Heilmittel für chemisch erhöhte Dummheit.
There is no cure for chemically enhanced Stupidity.
:iconfive-spirit-spheres:
I hate the little space for the title too. -_-

Hm... Nice poem. I really like it! ^_^ But the drawing is scary... But still... It's... sexy... (OMG I think I'm psyco)

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NOT born to raise hell. Indeed... =_=
:icondarkness-fox:
awesome work

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--Clubs I am in

~SpirtWolf-Club
:iconkat-reverie:
Really cool X3 I personally like the 'jelly blood' to me it looks like the blood has started to go sour, making it feel more decayed and make the skin color make more sense. i also like the chills the smile sends up my spine. Very good job *applauds*

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"dou ka!! kamisama kono boku ni TSUBASA kudasai yo"
(So!? Please give me wings God!)
-Vivid.
:iconicephantomayori:
YAY I HAVE GOOD REVIEWS ON MY CRAPPY ART WEEEEEEEE:spaz:
:iconkat-reverie:
XD I don't think it's crappy,

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"dou ka!! kamisama kono boku ni TSUBASA kudasai yo"
(So!? Please give me wings God!)
-Vivid.

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